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Treatment: A hot sociopath named SAM who is in love with a girl named JASMINE decides to investigate her life in order to control it and for her to be only his. He constantly stalks her and makes her feel uncomfortable. He takes photographs of her and people she hangs around with. His photography skills come from his job of being a photographer which has made him very controlling and demanding of what’s his.
Top Line: A hot sociopath who is in love with a girl decides to investigate her life in order to control it and for her to be only his. He takes photographs of her and people she hangs around with. He threatens them and contemplates killing the guy who admires the love of his life.
Twist: The girl finds these photos in his office whilst cleaning up but gets caught by doing it.
The Big Question: What will happen to the girl? And will she brake up with him?
The Big Question: What will happen to the girl? And will she brake up with him?
Locations: School workshop, Wimbledon streets, Mansion room, Photography studio
Props: Camera, photos in black and white, fake body parts, fake blood, wax, makeup, tape, weapons (workshop), lighting, red sharpie
Clothing: Psychopath- dark clothing, Girl- vibrant/normal clothes, Models- black and white dresses.
Sound: Chloe, owl hooting, scratches, steps, doors, dripping water,
You developed this treatment further so you could update this post.
ReplyDeleteI have updated this post to the most developed treatment to date.
ReplyDeleteWell done, Bea. Check spelling e.g. break.
ReplyDeleteBy 'hot' do you mean very attractive or very hot-headed (fiery, temperamental)?